Friday, November 12, 2010

M4 A Small Melon Revised

     I finally am done standing in the heat of the desert sun and sands.Looking behind myself, I'm guided to a shady cliff. I gazed behind myself to see a giant monument, paralyzed thinking who are these people? I'm quickly pulled away and guided to another strange location. I see the great pyramids, but then am blind-folded . This certainly is ancient cloth, it's rough and see-through. I pretend to be blind for the attention and for them not to notice I'm really perfectly capable of walking away.



     Soon they notice I can see after a stop for water, but don't care. They probably think I don't need to see considering they already think I'm a god. They now carry me to somewhere else, and slowly walk away. Soon I'm dropped down to see dead, dry crops. They start the same chant as last time, most likely wanting me to water their crops, witch I obviously can't do.Feeling uncomfortable, I chopped down an enormous pink fruit from a cactus. They make a cheer then chomp away.

2 comments:

  1. I love your post!
    I love that you included that the Egyptians think that you are a god and that they honor you when you solve problems like cactus fruit.
    -Lizzie

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  2. Quick thinking to get them to a cactus.

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